cells
It all began with an onion skin
rolled in the palms after removal —
microscopic veil, shredded to sheer
vulnerability with a touch.
Rolled in the palms after removal,
the laundry sheds dead skin, dust to dust,
vulnerability with a touch
of misplaced affection. For what holds
the laundry’s shedding skin, dust to dust,
dissolving? My hands flip back and forth
with misplaced affection for what holds
fast inside them, admitting only
dissolving. The hands flip back and forth,
fingers work, creating compartments
fast inside them, admitting only
what moves through by force and persuasion;
fingers work, creating compartments,
viral spaces exploding with guile
what moves through by force and persuasion
can’t be named, only felt — a motion
(that viral space exploding with guile),
a microscope zeros in on what
can’t be named, only felt — a motion
like a benign tremor or stutter;
a microscope zeros in on that
stumbling heated communication.
Like a benign tremor or stutter
from movement into meaning teased out,
calipers stretch molecular strings —
microscopic veil, shredded to sheer
infinity. Between, space equals
space, that began with an onion skin.
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Patricia F. Anderson and I wrote this piece together. You can see it in progress over at this post. — Dana

Congratulations on a real tour de force!
Dave, how long did that take us, anyway?
i really like where this one went and how the meaning of the lines changed from the first to the last stanza. very nice!
Yes wonderful twist. It is fabulous.
Intricate and beautiful. I love what’s done with “microscope.”
Patricia really drove the direction of this piece. Her medical background came in very handy.
Gosh, you all are so great! I didn’t even see these comments until today — feeling a bit silly! I’m craving doing this again, and want to join the sex show poem, but have gotten lost with “life happens” stuff. Thank you all very much!